A little poem to rate please(1-10)

A little poem to rate please(1-10)

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FallingShit
"title" fuck shit stack"?"

2008 Jul 10 • 226
Word of a Gun
de shit heeft getroffen de ventilator
 
 
2009 Feb 20 at 07:19 PST
Down Rodeo
Cap'n Moth of the Firehouse

Find the Hole II Participation Medal
2007 Oct 19 • 5486
57,583 ₧
I found there were a few too many errors, but really, if you think that poems ought to be rated on 1-10 you're doing something wrong.
 
 
2009 Feb 20 at 07:47 PST
KnightOfH3ll

2009 Jan 16 • 152
12 ₧
It was nice but i wouldnt realy call it a poem. i would rate it with 6.
 
 
2009 Feb 20 at 07:48 PST — Ed. 2009 Feb 20 at 07:48 PST
Mate de Vita
Kelli

2008 Oct 4 • 2453
159 ₧
Some of it is great, some of it is not so great.
...and that's the bottom line because Mate de Vita said so.
 
 
2009 Feb 20 at 08:01 PST — Ed. 2009 Feb 20 at 08:01 PST
aaronjer
*****'n Admin

Comrade General 5-Star
2005 Mar 21 • 4628
1,227 ₧
I stopped before finishing the first line. If you can't be bothered to spell it correctly then I certainly can't be bothered to read it.
 
 
2009 Feb 20 at 11:37 PST
the_cloud_system
polly pushy pants

2008 Aug 1 • 3074
-6 ₧
8 man kinda dull
I drink to forget but I always remember.
 
 
2009 Feb 20 at 16:48 PST
eDan Co.
Mighty Typist

Real Live Hands-On Rabbi Medal
Consolation Medal
2007 Sep 24 • 2921
252 ₧
the_cloud_system said:
8 man kinda dull

8 is a bad rating?


And I'm with Aaronjer on this one.
May contain traces of invisible text.
 
 
2009 Feb 21 at 03:57 PST
SolidKAYOS
Count Adelaide

Roar Of The Tigress Medal
2007 Jun 24 • 84
68 ₧
I stop at the first line of the misspell but then i went on to the next sentence
Make awkward sexual advances, not war.
Down Rodeo said:
Dammit, this was the one place that didn't have this, but noooooo, molkman pisses all over that
 
 
2009 Feb 21 at 07:56 PST
the_cloud_system
polly pushy pants

2008 Aug 1 • 3074
-6 ₧
good not very interesting thats what i ment
I drink to forget but I always remember.
 
 
2009 Feb 21 at 17:51 PST
NatureJay
SJA: Commander of Ruthless Abuse

Good Conduct Medal
2005 Mar 22 • 1871
574 ₧
There are two misspellings in the first line and you do it again in line seven unless you actually mean why will.

AABBCDEB/EFF?GGGG

you rhymed rage with rage and I don't think you know what swooning is.

Uh, more work needed?
100% natural, no antibiotics, and bloodgrass-fed
 
 
2009 Feb 21 at 18:03 PST — Ed. 2009 Feb 21 at 18:03 PST
xXJigsaw23Xx
IS what she said.

THISISAMEDAL
2007 Oct 21 • 912
41 ₧
ive written a few poems here read one

Cravings give in to the darkest desires, your proximity of insanity begins to higher.
Darkness comes closer and trys to creep in, you can almost feel the need within.
It's so close now you can't hardly resist, it itches inside to not persist.
Give in to your needs, bite down and enjoy, now is the time....your inhumanity feeds.
But even then, I had my honor. The largest Banora White tree grew on a wealthy man's estate. It was rumored, that those apples tasted the best, but I never stole from that tree, because the wealthy man's son, was my friend...
 
 
2009 Feb 21 at 23:02 PST
Down Rodeo
Cap'n Moth of the Firehouse

Find the Hole II Participation Medal
2007 Oct 19 • 5486
57,583 ₧
 
 
2009 Feb 22 at 05:59 PST
xXJigsaw23Xx
IS what she said.

THISISAMEDAL
2007 Oct 21 • 912
41 ₧
never said it was good i just wrote it lol
But even then, I had my honor. The largest Banora White tree grew on a wealthy man's estate. It was rumored, that those apples tasted the best, but I never stole from that tree, because the wealthy man's son, was my friend...
 
 
2009 Feb 22 at 09:54 PST
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