A preview: worldjumpers

A preview: worldjumpers

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molkman
Owner of George Washington's Prototype Mittens

Marine Warfare Corporal
Find the Hole Participation Medal
Find the Hole II Participation Medal
Tasty Br�twurst Medal
2005 May 2 • 2066
404 ₧
a little pick of what I'm currently working on:
http://www.molkman.de/files/flash/jumpers.htm

what do you think?
LET LOVE REIGN
 
 
2005 Jul 3 at 08:11 PDT
a_banana
He's an Ug_Man!

2005 May 3 • -591
looks good it should look even better when you finish.
<superjer> What? It is? Where? Huh? Hey -- scones!
 
 
2005 Jul 6 at 07:33 PDT
echidna3
Captain Signupnow

Most Australian Medal
2005 Apr 4 • -201
fix up the grammer though. "i didnt expect he flies that far" doesnt make sense. change it to"i didnt expect him to fly that far"
i dont like signatures. although there are some good ones out there
 
 
2005 Jul 7 at 06:46 PDT
molkman
Owner of George Washington's Prototype Mittens

Marine Warfare Corporal
Find the Hole Participation Medal
Find the Hole II Participation Medal
Tasty Br�twurst Medal
2005 May 2 • 2066
404 ₧
yeah, I noticed it AFTER I recorded the line... :(
I'll change it soon.

"I didn't expect him flying that far" would work too, wouldn't it?
LET LOVE REIGN
 
 
2005 Jul 7 at 11:20 PDT
SuperJer
Websiteman

2005 Mar 20 • 6299
Not really. The word expect usually goes with "that" or "to", like:
To expect that [something would happen].
or
To expect [someone] to [do something].


These are all correct:

"I didn't expect him to fly that far."
Most likely what someone would say

"I didn't expect that he would fly that far."
Correct, but too many words

"I didn't expect he'd fly that far."
Dropping the "that" and contracting the "would", this one is ok

"I didn't foresee him flying that far."
If you really want to say "him flying that far", but who says "foresee"?
 
 
2005 Jul 7 at 13:21 PDT
molkman
Owner of George Washington's Prototype Mittens

Marine Warfare Corporal
Find the Hole Participation Medal
Find the Hole II Participation Medal
Tasty Br�twurst Medal
2005 May 2 • 2066
404 ₧
wow, thanks for the extra english lesson ^^

I guess I'll use this one, it sounds similiar to the current one, so I don't have to record and animate the lips again.
"superjer" said:
"I didn't expect he'd fly that far."
Dropping the "that" and contracting the "would", this one is ok
LET LOVE REIGN
 
 
2005 Jul 8 at 06:51 PDT
echidna3
Captain Signupnow

Most Australian Medal
2005 Apr 4 • -201
mmmm good idea
i dont like signatures. although there are some good ones out there
 
 
2005 Jul 27 at 04:46 PDT
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