Rockbomb
Dog fucker (but in a good way now)

2009 Nov 13 • 2026

So I've been working on a song for this LoL song contest. Could I get some feedback on what I have thusfar?
Cappin' Temo


Edit: So I don't have to scroll to the middle of the page, here's the most recent version:
Toxic Shot

SRAW
Rocket Man

2007 Nov 6 • 2375
601 ₧

the samples or whatever it is of the kid going 1 2 3 4 is fucking annoying

sprinkles


2009 Sep 6 • 2545
10 ₧

That's the best fucking part you slut.

phoenix_r

2009 May 13 • 810
17 ₧

I like the vocal samples, but your arp wubb sounds well shit. Not just the wave modelling / tone, but the mastering (less attack, lower master plz), and the phrasing of the drops. Drop the drops, dig it? There is a lot of good stuff going on here, clean it up a bit, replace the wub, extend at least 2x (add a bridge!), and you're in business. Guh they flirt dangerously close to creepy but I really like the Temo vocal samples...good work, keep it up, post more as it progresses.

Rockbomb
Dog fucker (but in a good way now)

2009 Nov 13 • 2026

Thanks Pheonix, that's exactly what I was looking for.

It'll be probably just under 3 minutes when it's done, because it's for a contest and the max limit is 3 minutes. If it's well-recieved, I'll make a full length version... we'll see.

So just to make sure... do you hate the wobbles entirely, or just the tones of them? And, should I just drop them an octave, or keep the high points where they are and drop the low points an octave? I'll mess around with the synth and see if I can get a better sound out of it.



Also, the vocals are definitely staying, so QQ moar SRAW. The song is supposed to be based around a champion from LoL, and I chose Teemo.

the_cloud_system
polly pushy pants

2008 Aug 1 • 2970
-6 ₧

I put this up on my page.
but everybody is like 12 years old. Samuel adams, always the white choice.

buq25

2008 Jul 5 • 511
95 ₧

Showed it to my friend, he said the only thing he didn't like about it was that at the end it got repeditive.

I'm not really into dubstep (which I assume this is(lol, temostep)) what I'd prefere would be if the WUBWUBZ followed the beat of the song.

Also, I would like that the high pitch sound would lower after the drop. Roses are red,
Violets are blue.
Shouldn't violets be violet,
and roses be rose?

the_cloud_system
polly pushy pants

2008 Aug 1 • 2970
-6 ₧

http://www.facebook.com/permalink.php?story_fbid=481291388563083&id=368762413149315&ref=notif¬if_t=feed_comment Samuel adams, always the white choice.

Rockbomb
Dog fucker (but in a good way now)

2009 Nov 13 • 2026

Wow, thanks guys :D
I just got back from rafting, and the GW2 beta is going on, so I'm not gonna be working on it 'til Monday. The feedback is much appreciated, and thanks for posting it on FB cloud :D

aaronjer
*****'n Admin


2005 Mar 21 • 3944
1,227 ₧

Hey, here's a thought: Stop playing stupid games for silly girls.

the_cloud_system
polly pushy pants

2008 Aug 1 • 2970
-6 ₧

my mom is playing gw2 beta weekend also... Samuel adams, always the white choice.

Rockbomb
Dog fucker (but in a good way now)

2009 Nov 13 • 2026

Here's another WIP. Tried to capitalize on the creepiness of things and push it to the next level... did it work?
Initiate Temostep

the_cloud_system
polly pushy pants

2008 Aug 1 • 2970
-6 ₧

lol on scouts code. Samuel adams, always the white choice.

aaronjer
*****'n Admin


2005 Mar 21 • 3944
1,227 ₧

It's not okay to have fun doing things I don't like.

phoenix_r

2009 May 13 • 810
17 ₧

Rockbomb
Dog fucker (but in a good way now)

2009 Nov 13 • 2026

But seriously... better? Worse?

buq25

2008 Jul 5 • 511
95 ₧

The first third of the song is better. After the drop I can't hear any difference. Roses are red,
Violets are blue.
Shouldn't violets be violet,
and roses be rose?

aaronjer
*****'n Admin


2005 Mar 21 • 3944
1,227 ₧

I don't get the connection. But I have been standing uncomfortably close to teenage girls a lot lately!

Rockbomb
Dog fucker (but in a good way now)

2009 Nov 13 • 2026

Any difference from what?

buq25

2008 Jul 5 • 511
95 ₧

From the old song. Roses are red,
Violets are blue.
Shouldn't violets be violet,
and roses be rose?

sprinkles


2009 Sep 6 • 2545
10 ₧

Rockbomb
Dog fucker (but in a good way now)

2009 Nov 13 • 2026

Guys... I just realized something...
I ship out in a week :O

Imma be busy the next couple days, so idk if imma have time to get this done or not :/

the_cloud_system
polly pushy pants

2008 Aug 1 • 2970
-6 ₧

shhhheeeetttt Samuel adams, always the white choice.

Rockbomb
Dog fucker (but in a good way now)

2009 Nov 13 • 2026

Fuck, I forgot to submit this before I left for basic...
I would post the final version, but my comPuter is still in Colorado. Im gonna try to get it sent up here ASAP, and Ill post it then.