Cappin' Temo

Cappin' Temo

General — Page [1]
Rockbomb
Dog fucker (but in a good way now)

2009 Nov 13 • 2045
So I've been working on a song for this LoL song contest. Could I get some feedback on what I have thusfar?
Cappin' Temo


Edit: So I don't have to scroll to the middle of the page, here's the most recent version:
Toxic Shot
 
 
2012 Jun 7 at 14:12 PDT — Ed. 2012 Jun 17 at 20:59 PDT
SRAW
Rocket Man

2007 Nov 6 • 2525
601 ₧
the samples or whatever it is of the kid going 1 2 3 4 is fucking annoying
Free Steam Games
 
 
2012 Jun 7 at 14:39 PDT
sprinkles

Chrome Whore
2009 Sep 6 • 2547
10 ₧
That's the best fucking part you slut.
 
 
2012 Jun 7 at 14:59 PDT
phoenix_r

2009 May 13 • 898
17 ₧
I like the vocal samples, but your arp wubb sounds well shit. Not just the wave modelling / tone, but the mastering (less attack, lower master plz), and the phrasing of the drops. Drop the drops, dig it? There is a lot of good stuff going on here, clean it up a bit, replace the wub, extend at least 2x (add a bridge!), and you're in business. Guh they flirt dangerously close to creepy but I really like the Temo vocal samples...good work, keep it up, post more as it progresses.
BOO
 
 
2012 Jun 7 at 15:09 PDT
Rockbomb
Dog fucker (but in a good way now)

2009 Nov 13 • 2045
Thanks Pheonix, that's exactly what I was looking for.

It'll be probably just under 3 minutes when it's done, because it's for a contest and the max limit is 3 minutes. If it's well-recieved, I'll make a full length version... we'll see.

So just to make sure... do you hate the wobbles entirely, or just the tones of them? And, should I just drop them an octave, or keep the high points where they are and drop the low points an octave? I'll mess around with the synth and see if I can get a better sound out of it.



Also, the vocals are definitely staying, so QQ moar SRAW. The song is supposed to be based around a champion from LoL, and I chose Teemo.
 
 
2012 Jun 7 at 16:27 PDT
the_cloud_system
polly pushy pants

2008 Aug 1 • 3070
-6 ₧
I put this up on my page.
but everybody is like 12 years old.
I drink to forget but I always remember.
 
 
2012 Jun 8 at 15:02 PDT
buq25

2008 Jul 5 • 572
295 ₧
Showed it to my friend, he said the only thing he didn't like about it was that at the end it got repeditive.

I'm not really into dubstep (which I assume this is(lol, temostep)) what I'd prefere would be if the WUBWUBZ followed the beat of the song.

Also, I would like that the high pitch sound would lower after the drop.
Today's post brought to you by the letter: "heck".
 
 
2012 Jun 8 at 16:27 PDT
the_cloud_system
polly pushy pants

2008 Aug 1 • 3070
-6 ₧
 
 
2012 Jun 9 at 02:38 PDT
Rockbomb
Dog fucker (but in a good way now)

2009 Nov 13 • 2045
Wow, thanks guys :D
I just got back from rafting, and the GW2 beta is going on, so I'm not gonna be working on it 'til Monday. The feedback is much appreciated, and thanks for posting it on FB cloud :D
 
 
2012 Jun 9 at 16:47 PDT
aaronjer
*****'n Admin

Comrade General 5-Star
2005 Mar 21 • 4604
1,227 ₧
Hey, here's a thought: Stop playing stupid games for silly girls.
 
 
2012 Jun 10 at 00:55 PDT
the_cloud_system
polly pushy pants

2008 Aug 1 • 3070
-6 ₧
my mom is playing gw2 beta weekend also...
I drink to forget but I always remember.
 
 
2012 Jun 10 at 05:14 PDT
Rockbomb
Dog fucker (but in a good way now)

2009 Nov 13 • 2045
Here's another WIP. Tried to capitalize on the creepiness of things and push it to the next level... did it work?
Initiate Temostep
 
 
2012 Jun 13 at 12:31 PDT
the_cloud_system
polly pushy pants

2008 Aug 1 • 3070
-6 ₧
lol on scouts code.
I drink to forget but I always remember.
 
 
2012 Jun 13 at 18:28 PDT
aaronjer
*****'n Admin

Comrade General 5-Star
2005 Mar 21 • 4604
1,227 ₧
It's not okay to have fun doing things I don't like.
 
 
2012 Jun 13 at 18:52 PDT
phoenix_r

2009 May 13 • 898
17 ₧
aaronjer said:
Sick vid
BOO
 
 
2012 Jun 13 at 18:56 PDT
Rockbomb
Dog fucker (but in a good way now)

2009 Nov 13 • 2045
But seriously... better? Worse?
 
 
2012 Jun 13 at 19:45 PDT
buq25

2008 Jul 5 • 572
295 ₧
The first third of the song is better. After the drop I can't hear any difference.
Today's post brought to you by the letter: "heck".
 
 
2012 Jun 14 at 14:18 PDT
aaronjer
*****'n Admin

Comrade General 5-Star
2005 Mar 21 • 4604
1,227 ₧
I don't get the connection. But I have been standing uncomfortably close to teenage girls a lot lately!
 
 
2012 Jun 14 at 17:24 PDT
Rockbomb
Dog fucker (but in a good way now)

2009 Nov 13 • 2045
buq25 said:
The first third of the song is better. After the drop I can't hear any difference.

Any difference from what?
 
 
2012 Jun 14 at 19:17 PDT
buq25

2008 Jul 5 • 572
295 ₧
Rockbomb said:
buq25 said:
The first third of the song is better. After the drop I can't hear any difference.

Any difference from what?

From the old song.
Today's post brought to you by the letter: "heck".
 
 
2012 Jun 15 at 14:37 PDT
sprinkles

Chrome Whore
2009 Sep 6 • 2547
10 ₧
Rockbomb said:
better

 
 
2012 Jun 17 at 18:41 PDT
Rockbomb
Dog fucker (but in a good way now)

2009 Nov 13 • 2045
Guys... I just realized something...
I ship out in a week :O

Imma be busy the next couple days, so idk if imma have time to get this done or not :/
 
 
2012 Jun 17 at 18:46 PDT
the_cloud_system
polly pushy pants

2008 Aug 1 • 3070
-6 ₧
shhhheeeetttt
I drink to forget but I always remember.
 
 
2012 Jun 17 at 20:40 PDT
Rockbomb
Dog fucker (but in a good way now)

2009 Nov 13 • 2045
Fuck, I forgot to submit this before I left for basic...
I would post the final version, but my comPuter is still in Colorado. Im gonna try to get it sent up here ASAP, and Ill post it then.
 
 
2012 Aug 30 at 04:43 PDT
Page [1]