Correct English?

Correct English?

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newbie

2008 May 25 • 144
My map is finally done. But I want a text file with it so u can see who made it, max players and tips and credits and so on. And of caurse I want it to be correct english written in it. So can u see if something is incorrect, wrong spelled or only wierd and so on and how I should write instead ?

Map Created by Andreas B AKA HoppL'o's
xx.11.2008
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Max Players: 24
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Counter-Terrorists:
Kill the terrorists before the time runs out

Terrorists:
Stay alive....
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TIPS: high amount of airaccelerate = easy to surf on the flowers/hedges

low amount of airaccelerate = hard to surf on the flowers/hedges
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This map is deisigned for a high amount of airaccelerate so u can jump from high heights down to a surf "wall" without dieing. In my opinion
I think the gameplay gets better that way ;)


Credits go to:
- the guys on superjer.com for their great help and knowledge, without them hns_falldown hadn't exist
- And of course superjer.com for its great tutorial and forum:D
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ONLY Distribute this map if u INCLUDE THIS FILE with NO modfications , and never pretend you are the author


SEARCHING, SEEK AND DESTROY!!!

(Press FIRE to continue)
 
 
2008 Nov 27 at 06:10 PST — Ed. 2008 Nov 27 at 06:13 PST
Mate de Vita
Kelli

2008 Oct 4 • 2453
159 ₧
dieing -> dying
hns_falldown hadn't exist -> hns_falldown wouldn't exist
In my opinion I think... -> a) In my opinion... b) I think (that)... - can't be both.
SEARCHING,SEEK AND DESTROY -> (if I'm thinking correctly) SEARCH, SEEK AND DESTROY
You might wanna change the u into you as well.

I don't however understand what the tip says
...and that's the bottom line because Mate de Vita said so.
 
 
2008 Nov 27 at 06:35 PST
newbie

2008 May 25 • 144
Mate de Vita said:
dieing -> dying
hns_falldown hadn't exist -> hns_falldown wouldn't exist
In my opinion I think... -> a) In my opinion... b) I think (that)... - can't be both.
SEARCHING,SEEK AND DESTROY -> (if I'm thinking correctly) SEARCH, SEEK AND DESTROY
You might wanna change the u into you as well.


OK htank u

Mate de Vita said:

I don't however understand what the tip says


If u fall down to a surf wall and and pressing the oposite side (wasd) that the surfwall leaning to and ur having high airaccelerate u dont die. If u had low airaccelerate u would die.

Mate de Vita said:

SEARCHING,SEEK AND DESTROY -> (if I'm thinking correctly) SEARCH, SEEK AND DESTROY


that is a metallica song
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=O44yy1JW8B0
I also thought it was incorrect but when i listen they sung that:D (or maybe I heared wrong )
I thought it was a fun line :D
 
 
2008 Nov 27 at 06:53 PST — Ed. 2008 Nov 27 at 07:00 PST
Mate de Vita
Kelli

2008 Oct 4 • 2453
159 ₧
newbie said:
Mate de Vita said:

I don't however understand what the tip says


If u fall down to a surf wall and and pressing the oposite side (wasd) that the surfwall leaning to and ur having high airaccelerate u dont die. If u had low airaccelerate u would die.

ah, ok I get it now. How do you set airaccelerate?

newbie said:
Mate de Vita said:

SEARCHING,SEEK AND DESTROY -> (if I'm thinking correctly) SEARCH, SEEK AND DESTROY


that is a metallica song
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=O44yy1JW8B0
I also thought it was incorrect but when i listen they sung that:D (or maybe I heared wrong )
I thought it was a fun line :D

ah ok, haven't heard that song yet :D
...and that's the bottom line because Mate de Vita said so.
 
 
2008 Nov 27 at 07:16 PST — Ed. 2008 Nov 27 at 07:17 PST
newbie

2008 May 25 • 144
sv_airaccelerate 10000000
best is to try it on a surf_ map
u can set it to -1111.
try that haha its alot of fun. if u got a negative amount and u jump up in the air and press S u flying forward.

the song is not that good but the words fit in in an hns map haha
 
 
2008 Nov 27 at 07:21 PST — Ed. 2008 Nov 27 at 07:54 PST
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