NatureJay
SJA: Commander of Ruthless Abuse
2005 Mar 22 • 1531
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Shiggy shiggy bing bang:
I've watched a few of your videos now and it seems like in a few of them you've seemed to use a song as the backdrop, sort of the foundation of the joke. The problem with this is that, in doing so, you end up taking a long time to set up. By the time the joke appears, we've all known what it was for a long time. Tightening it up a little might help in the overall delivery, otherwise, if you're really stuck on the idea of having the whole song play out, there needs to be more happening, not just characters walking past the same stock background like a Hanna Barbara cartoon without dialogue.
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